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Vivian Ayumi
@vivian_ayumi
Level 2
Brasilien
Englisch, Portugiesisch
Über mich
Hello! My name is Vivian Ayumi and I am currently a Medical student, former English teacher and avid reader with a passion for diving deep into stories. I’m here to provide honest, constructive feedback to help polish and perfect your manuscript. Let’s make your story shine!
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Vivian Ayumi
60 $/Stunde
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Durchschnittliche Antwortzeit: 1 Stunde
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I will beta read your fantasy, romance, historical, dark, thriller or erotica book
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English Teacher
Pearson • Teilzeit
Aug 2024 - Jul 2025 • 11 mos
For about one year I worked as an English Teacher, teaching children, teenager and adults.
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k_mzammit
Großbritannien
Vivian is a fantastic beta-reader. My original experience on Fiverr left me really skeptical, but working with Vivian really was my redemption arc. She went above and beyond for her report and was really complimentary on what I had written. I could not suggest Vivian more.
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brandynordick
Kanada
Vivian’s feedback was incredibly detailed, honest, and constructive. She highlighted what worked well and what were her favorite parts of the novel, and why, which gave me confidence to keep writing. It was clear she read every chapter with care. Her comments on character development, pacing, dialogue,...
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alannaroselynch
Vereinigte Staaten
Vivian went above and beyond with her feedback on my novel. I knew I was asking a lot with a book over 170,000 words, but Vivian met the challenge and then some! Her attention to detail over so much text over a relatively short period of time amazed me. She pointed out phrases I had overused and moments...
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paigemcvicker
Vereinigte Staaten
Vivian was the first reader I ever had for my debut novel and she made me feel right at home reviewing my work. She is eloquent and enjoyed the read. Her critique of pacing and emotional depth was much needed. Also her comments on my 3 act structure was soooo neccesary. I can breath easy now and go into my next edit a happy girl.
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jordanwright96
Großbritannien
Unbelievably detailed analysis and feedback. Vivian is exceptionally proficient in noticing and analysing pacing, and in highlighting areas of the prose that may need tweaking. She explained her reasoning and was just as quick to point out what works as well as what might not work as well. I particularly...
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