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Vivian Ayumi
@vivian_ayumi
Level 2
Brasilien
Englisch, Portugiesisch
Über mich
Hello! My name is Vivian Ayumi and I am currently a Medical student, former English teacher and avid reader with a passion for diving deep into stories. I’m here to provide honest, constructive feedback to help polish and perfect your manuscript. Let’s make your story shine!
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Vivian Ayumi
60 $/Stunde
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Durchschnittliche Antwortzeit: 2 Stunden
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I will beta read your fantasy, romance, historical, dark, thriller or erotica book
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English Teacher
Pearson • Teilzeit
Aug 2024 - Jul 2025 • 11 mos
For about one year I worked as an English Teacher, teaching children, teenager and adults.
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adellaanns
Vereinigte Staaten
Vivian was really easy to work with even while I had a few notable manuscript changes I made during the course of her reading my story. She really seemed to pay careful attention to characters, their motivations, and motifs/mystery threads in the story. My feedback was mostly positive which was honestly...
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adri_writer
Vereinigte Staaten
Vivian gave me an incredibly thoughtful, detailed beta read. She clearly understood the heart of my story, including why the fast-burn romance works, and her feedback was both encouraging and specific. She highlighted the emotional moments that landed strongest while also pointing out pacing, continuity,...
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idaers
Norwegen
I had a blast working with this Beta reader. Her feedback was well received and she gave me a clear path to how I could: 1. See it from a new perspective. 2. Fix pacing issues. 3. Where my writing could improve. She also said many lovely things that made me very happy, like with how she saw my characters,...
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noellevalentine
Vereinigte Staaten
Vivian was amazing to work with!🩷She was super fast and her feedback report was detailed while still being really easy to read and understand. Her feedback was thoughtful and actionable, and I really appreciated that she understood the characters and what I was trying to accomplish with the story. She...
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kaypro1221
Vereinigte Staaten
Laufende Zusammenarbeit
Vivian really read the book closely. She beta read my 170,000 word novel in four separate arcs and not once did I get the sense that she skimmed or jumped ahead. She noted strengths and weaknesses as was not shy to point out issues. She is one of those readers that reads with emotion but also gives the...
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