I will review your query letter and improve your agent pitch

Writing a great book is only half the challenge. A query letter needs to capture an agent's attention and persuade them to keep reading.

As a published poet with a B.S. in English & Creative Writing and an M.A. in Creative Business Leadership, I provide detailed query critiques that combine storytelling expertise with publishing market insight.

My feedback focuses on:

• Hook, premise, and stakes
• Query structure and clarity
• Character and conflict presentation
• Genre positioning and marketability
• Agent appeal and reader engagement
• Strengths, weaknesses, and revision opportunities

Whether you're preparing to query agents, revise your submission package, or strengthen your pitch, I'll provide honest, actionable feedback while helping you preserve your unique voice.