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I will beta read your light novel or manga script
Light Novel,Manga Beta Reader
Hi! I'm Justy, a reader of light novels, manga, and manhwa. I'm brand new to beta reading this is my first time offering it as a service, so I'm still learning the ropes. What I can offer is an honest...
Über diesen Service
Are you writing a light novel, web novel, or manga/manhwa script and want honest reader feedback before you publish?
I'm new to beta reading professionally, but not new to reading critically I've spent years devouring light novels, manga, and manhwa, and I know what keeps me hooked versus what makes me put a story down. I bring genuine reader reactions, not vague "it's good" comments.
What I focus on:
- Pacing (isekai/action arcs, slice-of-life rhythm, slow-burn romance beats)
- Character voice and consistency
- World-building clarity are power systems, magic rules, or settings easy to follow?
- Dialogue flow and natural English phrasing
- Plot holes, confusing transitions, or info-dumps
What you'll get:
A written reader report with specific notes not just editing, but an honest account of my experience as your target reader: where I got hooked, where I got confused, where I lost interest.
What this is NOT:
Not a line edit or proofread. Not a rewrite. Feedback only your story stays yours.
Send your manuscript or script (chapters, PDF, Google Doc) and I'll get you thoughtful, genre-aware feedback to revise with confidence.
Genre:
Action
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Abenteuer
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Comic-Buch
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Mystery
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Romantik
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Fantasy
Sprache:
Englisch
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Hindi
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FAQ
What formats do you accept?
PDF, Google Docs, or Word documents work best. I can also read chapters pasted directly into a message.
What if my manuscript is longer than the word cap?
Please message me first — I can either extend the scope for an extra fee or suggest which package fits your word count.
Will you rewrite or edit my story directly?
No. I give feedback only — my notes are meant to guide your revisions, but the story and the writing stay entirely yours.
Do you specialize in a particular genre?
I focus on light novels, manga, and manhwa scripts, especially isekai, fantasy, romance, and slice-of-life, but I'm open to reading most genres within these formats.
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Justy gave me exactly what I needed: their overall impressions of my short story. They also read my story thoroughly and sent their report super fast. I appreciate their attention to detail and the questions they asked about the story. Justy was also specific in their impressions of all the characters....
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Justy gave me exactly what I needed: their overall impressions of my short story. They also read my story thoroughly and sent their report super fast. I appreciate their attention to detail and the questions they asked about the story. Justy was also specific in their impressions of all the characters....
50 $
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1 Tag
Dauer
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