Michelle J

I'm glad I had this story reviewed. Every story I've written in the past has been third person. This was my first time writing a story in first person and I was worried about dealing with the restrictions that come with it. I'll attempt a rewrite in first person to fix the issues, otherwise, I'll rewrite it in third person.

This was my first time working with Michelle, and I could see myself working with her again because she's insightful, knowledgeable, and offers helpful suggestions and improvements with each critique. She took the time to understand the characters and the overall plot of my book, and gave me a lot to work with. I think she would be an asset to any writer.

My experience with Michelle J exceeded my expectation. Michelle provided thorough feedback about my book and gave good advice as to what I could and should try to fix to make it better. She did not try to change my voice, instead told me what worked for her as a reader and what didn't. She delivered... Mehr anzeigen

Michelle was thorough in her feedback and she gave me a lot of insight that'll help me with improving my book. I would recommend her service!

good feedback