I will beta read mystery, thriller for tension, plot holes, twists

Yes, as an evaluator for a popular literary journal that publishes fiction across multiple genres I analyze submissions, working directly with the editorial team. In addition, I have assisted dozens of authors by providing comprehensive, constructive manuscript critique and line editing services.

My feedback and suggestions will combine an engaged reader's perspective with the insight I've gained from professionally reviewing and critiquing literary journal submissions and collaborating with various editors while readying my own and other authors' work for publication.

I strive to provide clear, professional, constructive feedback that supports your vision as the author. I like to collaborate by sharing insights, making suggestions and offering explanations that hone your style and strengthen your storytelling so that it impacts readers the way you intend.

Unless otherwise requested, I’ll provide the sample line edit on the first 1000 words (roughly 4 double-spaced pages). If you’d prefer a different section, feel free to specify (example: please apply the sample line edit to Chapter Fourteen, pages 92-96, the coffee shop action scene).

I work with DOC, DOCX and Google Docs. If sending a Google Doc, please download and attach your manuscript as a DOCX and specify that you prefer working in Google Docs so that I can use the correct program while completing the sample line edit. I cannot accept links at this time.

No, all sample line edits are made by hand in order to maintain nuance, style, subtext, emotional depth and voice. I apply industry-standard editing techniques, using the Chicago Manual of Style and other trusted references. Additionally, I do not use AI while generating beta reader reports.

Yes, I regularly read full-length novels. Packages are structured for clarity, and longer manuscripts are welcome - feel free to message me if your word count is above the listed range and I'll quote you a fair, proportional rate.

That's common - especially in early or hybrid drafts. Just let me know if you'd like help determining which way your story leans. I can comment upon tropes, genre conventions, and reader expectations: noir vs hard-boiled, cozy vs traditional whodunit, domestic suspense vs psychological thriller.

I work with manuscripts at all stages, from first drafts to polished works nearing submission or publication, providing comprehensive feedback on multiple elements while focusing on what will help your story resonate most with readers.

Yes, I have experience reading and critiquing literary fiction, fantasy, Sci-Fi, YA, horror, and romance. Just message me and I'll create a custom offer focused on your specific genre and tailor my feedback accordingly.