Fay

I'm torn. On the one hand, the report missed a lot of details. The novel's protagonist wasn't mentioned once, and some of the plot events/mechanics were either misinterpreted or misremembered. The report doc itself seemed to be a speech-to-text transcript and was not cleaned up or formatted in a readable... Mehr anzeigen

I think that my giving me a list of things to look at detracted from her overall report. I won't do that again. Her beta reading was a group that I hired and her opinion, opinions went outside of what the other readers said. I think perhaps the genre of literary thriller is not something she's used to.... Mehr anzeigen

One of the best breakdowns of my entire story from start to finish hitting all categories from pacing to characterization to how things could be worded to strengthen the manuscript. I would give 6 stars if that was possible. Great communication as well and very adaptive! Highly recommend!

Fay delivered on time, with some good feedback. I'd spent so long writing and re-writing and completley lost any perspective on the work and whether it was even coherent. But Fay followed along just fine and gave some good pointers, she even caught some embarrasing errors.

I was a bit apprehensive because my work is a literary novel, slight of plot, but Fay not only understood it, but she made a number of cogent recommendations. In addition, although I specifically stated I didn't need a line edit, she pointed out a number of typos. Truly an excellent job.