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I will beta read your manuscript with attention to the narrative

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Dario
4,7
4,7

Italien

Ich spreche Italienisch, Englisch

13 Aufträge abgeschlossen

Copywriter and writer. I like to analyze books in terms of story, characters, conflict, narrative perimeter, logic and weaknesses. The author's intent is sacred, but it is how this intent is brought t...
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Showing your work to others is very important to improve yourself, I can help you, plus I love reading!


For more than 8 years I have been studying scriptwriting, storytelling and editing; I am a writer myself and as such I spend a lot of time having my friends and family proofread my writings.


I read a lot of fantasy and sci-fi but I don't have a favorite one, you can send me thriller, horror, investigative, historical, romance. The art of fiction is my greatest passion since I was a child, as you can see from my profile I am not yet a "Fiverr guru", I'm here because I would like to read the work of other writers who are always trying to improve themselves and maybe give them some advice to make their work flourish.


My report will focus on:

  • The pace of the narrative
  • Emotional involvement
  • Characters and characterization
  • Wordbuilding
  • My emotional feedback
  • What I particularly appreciated and what less
  • Dialogues, descriptions, use of narrative summary and "show it"
  • Precision
  • The story

(for writers in English: my report is translated from Italian into English so that I can communicate in the most in-depth way possible)


I read in:

  • English
  • Italiano


Send me your story, surprise me.

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Genre:

Science-Fiction/Fantasy

Sprache:

Englisch

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Italienisch

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    aurorawriterr

    Wiederkehrender Kunde

    IT

    Italien

    4,7

    Ho lavorato per la seconda volta con Dario e mi ritengo ancora più soddisfatta! Ha mostrato ogni punto di forza e di debolezza del mio manoscritto con l’ironia e la professionalità che lo contraddistinguono!

    50 $-100 $

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    4 Wochen

    Dauer

    Hilfreich?
    Ja
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    mariocepparulo

    IT

    Italien

    5

    Lavorare con Dario è stato allo stesso tempo semplice e soddisfacente. È riuscito a soddisfare pienamente le mie richieste ponendo un occhio oggettivo al testo che gli ho fornito. Credo proprio che tornerò anche in futuro per avere nuove dritte da parte di un lettore accurato

    Bis zu 50 $

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    2 Tagen

    Dauer

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    Ja
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    aurorawriterr

    Wiederkehrender Kunde

    IT

    Italien

    4

    Ho lavorato con Dario per il mio noir, e ho trovato il suo report molto interessante e, soprattutto, utile, perché nel file mi ha saputo approfondire i punti forti e quelli su cui lavorare della mia scrittura. Sono molto soddisfatta!

    50 $-100 $

    Preis

    4 Wochen

    Dauer

    Hilfreich?
    Ja
    Keine
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    jessicalissner

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    Indonesien

    5

    Dario was a beta reader for a fantasy novel I am writing that is based in Florence, Italy in 1946. He gave 22 pages of feedback and also went to lengths to correct my Italian expressions and call out what was good and how it helped. I'd recommend working with him if you want a good report.

    50 $-100 $

    Preis

    4 Wochen

    Dauer

    Hilfreich?
    Ja
    Keine
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    robertotrue

    IT

    Italien

    4,3

    I received a detailed document with the feedback on the book I wrote. I think the feedback are interesting, since he told me what is good and what should be improved. His feedback opens for a better, improved version of the manuscript.

    Bis zu 50 $

    Preis

    9 Tagen

    Dauer

    Hilfreich?
    Ja
    Keine
Bewertungen

12 Bewertungen für diesen Service
4,7

(10)
(2)
(0)
(0)
(0)
Zusammensetzung der Bewertung
  • Kommunikation
    4,9
  • Qualität der Lieferung
    4,8
  • Preis-Leistungs-Verhältnis der Lieferung
    4,2
Sortieren nach:
Am relevantesten
  • A
    image-docs

    aurorawriterr

    Wiederkehrender Kunde

    IT

    Italien

    4,7

    Ho lavorato per la seconda volta con Dario e mi ritengo ancora più soddisfatta! Ha mostrato ogni punto di forza e di debolezza del mio manoscritto con l’ironia e la professionalità che lo contraddistinguono!

    50 $-100 $

    Preis

    4 Wochen

    Dauer

    Hilfreich?
    Ja
    Keine
  • M

    mariocepparulo

    IT

    Italien

    5

    Lavorare con Dario è stato allo stesso tempo semplice e soddisfacente. È riuscito a soddisfare pienamente le mie richieste ponendo un occhio oggettivo al testo che gli ho fornito. Credo proprio che tornerò anche in futuro per avere nuove dritte da parte di un lettore accurato

    Bis zu 50 $

    Preis

    2 Tagen

    Dauer

    Hilfreich?
    Ja
    Keine
  • A
    image-docs

    aurorawriterr

    Wiederkehrender Kunde

    IT

    Italien

    4

    Ho lavorato con Dario per il mio noir, e ho trovato il suo report molto interessante e, soprattutto, utile, perché nel file mi ha saputo approfondire i punti forti e quelli su cui lavorare della mia scrittura. Sono molto soddisfatta!

    50 $-100 $

    Preis

    4 Wochen

    Dauer

    Hilfreich?
    Ja
    Keine
  • J
    image-docs

    jessicalissner

    ID

    Indonesien

    5

    Dario was a beta reader for a fantasy novel I am writing that is based in Florence, Italy in 1946. He gave 22 pages of feedback and also went to lengths to correct my Italian expressions and call out what was good and how it helped. I'd recommend working with him if you want a good report.

    50 $-100 $

    Preis

    4 Wochen

    Dauer

    Hilfreich?
    Ja
    Keine
  • R

    robertotrue

    IT

    Italien

    4,3

    I received a detailed document with the feedback on the book I wrote. I think the feedback are interesting, since he told me what is good and what should be improved. His feedback opens for a better, improved version of the manuscript.

    Bis zu 50 $

    Preis

    9 Tagen

    Dauer

    Hilfreich?
    Ja
    Keine

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