I will alpha read your first chapter and provide detailed feedback

Worried your first chapter won't nail you an agent? Wondering if your story has the stellar opening it deserves?

Have no fear, your editor is here!

As a fresh set of eyes, I will comb through your first chapter and provide detailed feedback on your fantasy story, along with a reader's report.

But what's the difference between an alpha reader and a beta reader, you say? Easy answer: a beta reader reviews a more polished manuscript, whilst an alpha reader digs deeper into a rougher draft as a set of eyes to catch mistakes before they derail your novel.

In each package, I will look at:

• Characters- Their introductions, personalities, and dialogue, checking for inconsistencies.
• Plot- The chapter's structure, feedback on the hook, and ensuring it flows exceptionally.
• Setting- Immersive worldbuilding, character interaction, and conquering info-dumping.

Please reach out with any questions, and I will respond as quickly as possible. I look forward to working with you!

-Bella Snow :D