I will provide industry script coverage and professional screenwriting notes

Looking for the insider gatekeeper feedback your script needs to survive the competition gauntlet? As a professional screenplay reader and coverage analyst for elite international competitions like BlueCat, ScriptMatix (before they transitioned to AI), and the Chicago Screenplay Awards, I have evaluated hundreds of scripts against rigorous agency and festival standards. I am also an active writer for The Onion, a former collaborator with The Second City, and a live entertainment director and manager. As a manager at Zanies Comedy Club, I've worked with countless comedians, performers, writers, talent agents and managers, which has also taught me exactly what catches an executives eye.

I will provide a thorough, candid, and constructive analysis of your TV pilot, feature screenplay, or short film script, including:

• Logline & Premise: Is your hook commercially viable and clear?
• Pacing & Structure: Actionable breakdown of your narrative arcs and scene progression.
• Character Development: Analysis of character motivations, depth, and distinct dialogue voices.
• Production & Marketability Notes: Concrete feedback on how to make yo budget-friendly or ready for representation.